85 - Reunited And It Feels So Good

Follow the every day lives of inanimate objects who struggle to make ends meet in this heartwarming tale of friendship and evil hats in this very lazy yet somwhat in depth adventure comic series. Looking for any and all feedback -- thanks! Notice: Althrough childlike in appearance, this comic has adult themes and demented humor. So ... watch yourself!
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Nice hat.
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GreatZot wrote:Nice hat.
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At this point Tee says my little comic is really confusing, convoluted and out of control. Agree?

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Perhaps a bit. It feels like it's becoming more about "how bizarre can I make this situation" and less about jokes and funny one-liners.
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chex wrote:Perhaps a bit. It feels like it's becoming more about "how bizarre can I make this situation" and less about jokes and funny one-liners.
Thanks

This does make sense in my head as part of a storyline I haven't finished revealing.

There's a logical reason why Bread Slice and Walter returned and a proper enemy explanation coming too :)
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I was a bit blunt, wasn't I? Sorry 'bout that. I look forward to the reveal!
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chex wrote:I was a bit blunt, wasn't I? Sorry 'bout that. I look forward to the reveal!
I want honest feedback.

I was holding on to key story points which I thought would tease and tantalize the audience but withheld too long LOL
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I have the attention span of a gnat.
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chex wrote:I have the attention span of a gnat.
Nah

you have the attention span of a box of cereal
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The smurf are we talking about again?
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chex wrote:The smurf are we talking about again?
go back to sleep or make 1000 more posts somewhere
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Woo! Permission to post Shay!

Just kidding. I don't wait for permission. I do what I want.
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