231 - Resistance is Futile

Follow the every day lives of inanimate objects who struggle to make ends meet in this heartwarming tale of friendship and evil hats in this very lazy yet somwhat in depth adventure comic series. Looking for any and all feedback -- thanks! Notice: Althrough childlike in appearance, this comic has adult themes and demented humor. So ... watch yourself!
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I need to get a unicorn.
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GreatZot wrote:I need to get a unicorn.
"Ohm my goodness"

Come on that was my best line ever
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Your electric pun was countered by your unnecessary apostrophe.
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GreatZot wrote:Your electric pun was countered by your unnecessary apostrophe.
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"You're kid brought about the end of the Universe!" You're using the wrong,"You're" in your comic.
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GreatZot wrote:"You're kid brought about the end of the Universe!" You're using the wrong,"You're" in your comic.
You don't understand, Zot - the evil entity inside the demon child's body is destroying the universe - so it's causing ripples of intergalactic glitches and extra apostrophes that represent reality damage.
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Ah, it all makes sense now. Well played.
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GreatZot wrote:Ah, it all makes sense now. Well played.
Did I use It's right?
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The world may never know.
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GreatZot wrote:The world may never know.
"That means resistance has it's limits"

I used it's in a possessive was as I thought that was right for the sentence, not as in "It is"

Apostrophies have two meanings, to show possession or to shorten a word

I can't believe I put you're, proof read it multiple times and showed the wife and never noticed :(
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Don't beat yourself up. It is all good fun.
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GreatZot wrote:Don't beat yourself up. It is all good fun.
I know - but never learn

I've only been making the same mistakes since Steroids Man, NELG, Gear and Clip, etc etc

My tombstone is going to be filled with unnessessary apostrophies.
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