Ever Growing Story II - Kevin and Destructo

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Re: Ever Growing Story II - Kevin and Destructo

Post by lucsss[]OXO »

40(60 more till 100)

"Ah crap, I hope what I think happened didn't happen," said Kevin whose pain was beginning to wear off. "Now why are those policemen dragging me across the floor?" Then he saw the robber in the distance. "Huh?" said Kevin.
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Re: Ever Growing Story II - Kevin and Destructo

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This story is going nowheres and is retarded...... let's start totally fresh.
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Re: Ever Growing Story II - Kevin and Destructo

Post by Wesley »

I actually liked the direction some of us (me) were taking it. But I have to agree it got kinda.... immature, lame, and nonsensical toward the end.

I would not mind taking the good bits and working on them to make a good story.
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